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高考英语读后续写专题（六）一：典题技法指导1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Paragraph2:Witheverythingready.Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness..
1写作思路1.确定主题：大主题是人与社会。故事主要内容是Mrs|.Meredith希望孩子们帮助一个困难家庭，儿子John想出好方法。孩子们一起准备做爆米花送给Bernard，让他卖爆米花挣钱。2.时空变化：有一些时空转换的设定。第一段可以设定在上午发生在家里做爆米花。第二段可以将时间设定在午饭后至晚上这一段时间。3.续写难点：情节比较简单，但想象的空间很大，须设定波折。一般的处理方法是侧重细节描写，心理活动与情感描写，平时需要积累一定量的能表现人物情绪与心理的具体动作词汇。提纲Paragraph1:WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,t|oo.1.Withhersupport,thechildrenmadeaplantoputtheideaintoaction.2."Harry,gonextdoortoborrowapopcornmachine!Clara,fetchsomecornforpopcorn!"Johnsaidexcitedlybeforehewenttothestoretobuysomeseasoningsandsomepaperbags.3.Shortlyafter,theyreturnedandgatheredinthekitchen.4.Cautiously,John|putsomecorninthemachineandswitchediton.5.Foramoment,noneofthemspokeandtheywaitedandwaited,itseemed,forseveralhours.6.Thensuddenlycametheamazingsoundsofcornpopping,andallofthemclappedandjumpedwithgreatjoy.7.Thewholemorning,thechildrenmade30bagsofpopcorninall,andthenafterlunch,they|carriedthemtoBernard's.Paragraph2:Witheverythingready.Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.1.Theywenttoabusystreetandstartedtocryforsale,"Popcorn,popcorn..."2.Buttotheirdisappointment,itturnedoutthatnoonecametobuytheirpopcorn.3.Wheneveningfell,theirspiritssank.4.Exhaustedandhungry,t|heydecidedtogobackhome,notknowingwhattodowith30bagsofpopcorn.5.Justthen,agoodideapoppedintoJohn'sheadandheexclaimed,"Aha!Wecansell
2popcornoutsidethegateofthecinema."6.Sureenough,30bagsofpopcornsoldoutalmostimmediatelyastheycalledout,"Buytwoandgetonefree..."7.Withthemoneyinhishan|d,Bernardthankedthemfortheirgeneroushelp,tearsofgratitudewellingupinhiseyes.参考范文Paragraph1:WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Withhersupport,thechildrenmadeaplantoputtheideaintoaction."Harry,gonextdoortoborrowapopcornmachine!Clara,fetchsomecornforpopcor|n!"Johnsaidexcitedlybeforehewenttothestoretobuysomeseasoningsandsomepaperbags.Shortlyafter,theyreturnedandgatheredinthekitchen.Cautiously,Johnputsomecorninthemachineandswitchediton.Foramoment,noneofthemspokeandtheywaitedandwaited,itseemed,forseveralhours.Thensuddenlycametheamazin|gsoundsofcornpopping,andallofthemclappedandjumpedwithgreatjoy.Thewholemorning,theymade30bagsofpopcorninall,andthenafterlunch,theycarriedthemtoBernard's.Paragraph2:Witheverythingready.Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Theywenttoabusystreetandstartedtocryforsale
